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jueves, 10 de junio de 2010

Stolen Children

This story is about a girl named Amy who has lost her father in a car accident and thoughts it was her fault. Amy now works as a babysitter to help maintain the family. One day she receives a phone call from Ms. Edgerton to tell her to take care of Kendra her daughter because Ms. Edgerton’s mom broke her leg and she didn’t wanted to take Kendra.
Amy accepts. She went to Ms. Edgerton house that wasn’t really a house it was a big mansion. She takes good care of Kendra, she played with Kendra all the day until it was time for her nap. Amy gets tired and goes to have a nap at the living room. When she finally wake up and went to see how was Kendra, but she didn’t find her and realized that Kendra had been kidnapped. She looked everywhere, and all of the sudden appeared a guy named Smokey with a gun, but Hugh (his partner) stops Smokey from giving a shoot to Amy and tells her get in the car. They take both Amy and Kendra to a faraway place.
When Ms. Edgerton returned and saw a note that the bad guys left at the door, she quickly ran to the phone, and called the Amy’s mother. They call the police, so can they find their kids, the note that the bad guys put a note on the door. The note said t the amount of money they want, and to not call the police or they will never see their kids.
The place where they took Amy and Kendra was a mobile house. Hugh told Smokey to go buy food and envolopes at the store at the store while he takes care of the girls. After Smokey went to the store, he told Amy to get prepared because the next day they were going to make the first video. Amy then knew that she needed to send clues through the videos that Smokey and Hugh won’t recognize, but that her friend Jorja will recognize from the book of Secrets, Amy was writing.
The next day after the video was taken Hugh told Smokey to buy the newspaper. While Smokey was gone Amy saw that Hugh was asleep so she took advantage of this and ran away. She didn’t really go far because of Kendra that made her slow. Hugh surprised them and told Amy if she ran again she will be killed. Smokey make the second video, again Amy putted a clue.
When Jorja, Ms. Edgerton and the Amy’s mom saw the video, Jorja discovered a clue that the bad guys had a white caravan. The police discovered that it was steeled from a person near the forest.
At night while everyone was asleep Amy couldn’t sleep because she thought that Smokey would kill her if she was left alone without Hugh to protect her. She wake up and went to the car looking for the gun and to disappear it. When She was looking for the gun she found the keys but didn’t wanted to go without Kendra. Amy thought that she could go and get help and then come back as quickly as possible with the car. But Amy didn´t go, so she went again to the cabin and slept afraid of getting alone with Smokey.
The next day Hugh told Smokey to deliver the video to the Edgerton. When the video arrived they saw the next clue that was about the Kendra’s nanny and they started to search for her. The detective Roovelt went to the apartment where the nanny lived but there wasn’t anyone. She went with the administrator that told him that Mrs. Darrielie (the nanny) was dead. She told the detective she said this to her one morning while she cleaned the entrance of the house. He was thinking about that clue and the nanny.
At the cabin Amy was terrified of the idea that she couldn’t hide the gun from Smokey. When he came back Hugh asked Smokey were was the gun and Smokey said it was in the glove compartment and Amy said it wasn’t there and then Smokey with an angry eyes turned to Amy. Then Hugh said him to calm down that the gun was at a safe place that they didn’t know. That same day Smokey told the girls to get prepared for the next video. Amy said they were going to be ready but first she will show a new game to Kendra. Amy taught a game to Kendra that contained again the clue for Jorja to discover. After the video, Smokey went to send it. Amy and Kendra stayed out of the Cabin. Then two women in horses came, and Hugh told them to go. Amy was sure they had seen her.
When the two women went they went to a store where they talked about what they saw and that they should call the police, but they didn’t. When they received the video they saw that things Amy said words from the game they liked to play the charades that meant that the place was close to a store called Saddle-Stop-Store-Country. The detective went there and talked with the cashier and told her if she saw something strange call him.
Meanwhile Amy was playing with Kendra a game in which Kendra was a queen. Then Hugh told them to get inside, then a helicopter passed over the cabin but didn’t saw them. Then the helicopter went and Smokey was already arriving and he told Hugh that he had changed the car because a cop was after him. Hugh also told him that a helicopter had passed nearby. Hugh told him that they should change of place. Then Amy took Kendra by the hand and took her to the car. Amy went off and then the fuel finished and a helicopter passed by and took them to their home.
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